Weather you intended it or not.
Tillman: by doing a claymation with knox you are being judged by comparison. No offense, but man you got a ways to go. Things you need.
1) A unique character style. Knox has a definitive style for his characters. Yours look like everyone who has ever tried to make a man out of clay.
2) Voices that don't sound so undeveloped. Without creating a unique vocal style you have still managed to squash the innate character in your own voice. Go all the way, or stop entirely.
3) A script. Again something unique to you. Stay away from generic. Voices in head. Cliche. Unless you can do something new with it.
You're going to get a lot of negative comments. That's the effect frontpage has. Doesn't mean some of them aren't spot on. Most of them will even hint in the right direction. You still made a good effort, and I hope you don't give up.
Knox: Don't do this to anyone again. You malicious bastard. Love your work.