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This piece is wonderful. You should be proud.

Critique: There could be a little finessing done to the left eye ( as we are looking at it ). It seems to me it needs to come closer to the nose and rotated counterclockwise just a touch. I also think the flat outline on the jaw is too thick. It needs more of the rendered part of the face to come through the jaw.

Take my critique with a grain of salt. I tend to work my art until all the life is squeezed out of it. Again you should be proud. This is great.

ghlow responds:

thank you! If I ever work on this thing again, I will definitely take this into consideration.

I've got your nose!

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